iSCSI: Naming and Discovery Draft...

["Tanjore K. Suresh" <Tanjore.Suresh@sun.com>]

Voruganti,



	Here are some minor comments/feedback reading this document.
	
	1. Section 5.2 Discovery Domain
	
		DD Symbolic name
		DD ID
		
		DD Member: WWUI
		DD Member: IP Address
		
		
	What does this DD member signify, is this one iSCSI device
	part of Discovery Domain or should this be a list of iSCSI devices
	in that Discovery Domain.  I thought clarifying that would be
	usefull for the reader. Frankly, I didnot understand what it is?
	
	
	2. Appendix A iSCSI WWUI Notes...
	
		It looks to me the examples under
		
"Using Intitiator and Target WWUI During Login" can be clubbed with Appendix B
which provides the  different iSCSI Login Scenarios" It looks like some
of the scenarios presented are also in the Appendix B already which seems
to convey the same thing. 


	3. Appendix B, B.4.5,
	  Target Conflict 45 doesnot seem to be appropriate.
		
		I have not reviewed all the documents yet to give a 
		recommendation and hence cannot give, but feel 
		" Target Conflict" doesnot
		convey the meaning of the Scenario indicating
		case of " simple devices that can handle one device or
		the target had reached the limit of its Initiators' capacity."

	
	
	4. Typo in page 17
	
	Directory Agent(DA) is an optional part of discovery. If a DA..
	
	......... by the user Agents, to reduce the network load of all UAs
	trying to discovery all SAs
		  ^^^^^^^^ should be "discover".
		  
Thanks
sureshtk