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[Date Prev][Date Next][Thread Prev][Thread Next][Date Index][Thread Index] comments on naming&discovery draft1) Section 4.2 last line before Section 4.2.1 "target MUST send any iSCSI-level async on this session, allowing the initiator to discover new targets.." The session mentioned here is a session to the canonical target. However, the iSCSI 05 draft does not mention any such condition in Sec 2.18 on Async Message. In there, a SCSI event (note: not iSCSI) is used to notify availability of new targets. 2) Appendix C, Section 5 "Stateful Inspection Firewall" It contains statements of the sort "I dont expect/think.." These statements could be rephrased to be impersonal. 3) Section 4.3 Middle of page 17 (After reference to RFC 2608) -> "A target can register either its canonical target, ..." Multiple references to term "target" is confusing. It can be changed to refer to the term "Network entity" introduced earlier in the document. -> "A network entity can register its canonical target,.." 4) Sec 4.2 SendTargets Command The status code 0x42 mentioned is now 0x02 in iSCSI document. A similar mismatch exists in some codes listed in B.4.5. It might help to just use error names and not numbers to avoid this problem. [readers can do error code "discovery"! ] -Sandeep
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