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[Date Prev][Date Next][Thread Prev][Thread Next][Date Index][Thread Index] iscsi: comments to iSCSI rev 6Section 2.2.3: The AHSLength field where it is requires RISC type processors to shift the length left by 8 bytes. Section 2.3.5, 3rd paragraph: contradicts itself. First it states that a AHS header "MUST" be present, then goes on to define what the bi-di read length is if the header is not present. If it's not present, it's a protocol error. Section 2.4.1, last sentance: "b0-b3 MUST be 0" s/b "b1-b4 MUST be 0". Section 2.7.7: why have residual bits/fields in a data PDU? If there is residual, then send a status PDU indicating the residual value. Section 2.8.3: Keys not understood by the target should be expicitely indicated as not being understood. Silence is not a good way to indicate that one does not understand something. Also, something more ascii friendly such as a semi-colon (;) should be used to separate key-value pairs instead of a null (0x00) character. This would allow generic text manipulation libraries to be used. Section 2.9.3: why "MUST" key-value pairs be returned in the same order they were issued? Seems like a rather strong requirement for no apparent reason. Section 2.12.3: indicate that the LUN is copied from the NOP-IN. This is much more clear than "the correct value for the task". Section 2.14: Why is there no CmdSN for the logout command? Also, 2 ways of performing the same operation (cleaning up) are stated in the 3rd paragraph. In the interest of reducing "options", I suggest that one be picked as the only method. Section 2.17.4: "The target assigns" should be "The target may assign". Section 6.3 & 6.7.2: why "MUST" a target reissue missing responses? What if it is not able to? There should be the option to reject the SNACK. Appendix: "Initial Marker-less Interval" - I say again, there should not be a "minimum markerless interval". This should be whatever is negotiated. -Matt Wakeley Agilent Technologies
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