Re: iSCSI: A couple of definitions

["Julian Satran" <Julian_Satran@il.ibm.com>]

thanks - julo


                                                                                                  
                    Luben Tuikov                                                                  
                    <luben@splente       To:     iSCSI <ips@ece.cmu.edu>                          
                    c.com>               cc:                                                      
                    Sent by:             Subject:     iSCSI: A couple of definitions              
                    owner-ips@ece.                                                                
                    cmu.edu                                                                       
                                                                                                  
                                                                                                  
                    03-01-02 23:53                                                                
                                                                                                  
                                                                                                  



1. CID: The second sentence refers to ``this connection''
and there doesn't seem to be any connections in context.

Since ``within'' is used as a preposition, shouldn't the
sentence read as follows:

  It is a unique ID identifying a connection within
  the session for the initiator.

2. iSCSI Transfer Direction: ``with regard to'' has
identical meaning to ``with respect to''. But isn't
``with respect to'' more common in mathematical and
computer science literature, and ``with regard to''
being more common in the humanities and social sciences?
Shouldn't the first sentence read:

  The iSCSI transfer direction is defined with respect
  to the initiator.

--
-l