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[Date Prev][Date Next][Thread Prev][Thread Next][Date Index][Thread Index] RE: iSCSI - started countdown to 11Julian,
The
language in A.1 should be changed from the most recent change. Two
things
on the
changes -
1. We
should have a MAY instead of (the now lower case) should to
indicate the agreement reached - or worst case delete
the sentence.
2. The
last sentence in the first para - newly added & repititive
(last
sentence in previous paragraph) -
(in my
opinion) tries to get around the agreement. It should
either
be
deleted, or changed to "some receiver implementation will
provide
(significantly) better performance when the sender
inserts markers" or
"some
receiver implementations may provide degraded performance
to
senders which do not insert markers". I prefer that we just not add
it.
You
have something like that in the previous paragraph anyway.
One
comment on what was not changed -
1. The
last sentence in the para before A.1 - "in certain environment,
a
sender
...." - I would suggest be changed to "in certain implementation,
...".
As the
behavior is more implementation dependent.
We
reached a compromise on keeping it in the main draft and
making
it a
MAY. I hope we can keep that spirit.
Somesh
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