Re: FMarker, RFMarkInt and SFMarkInt negotiation

[Martins Krikis <mkrikis@yahoo.com>]

Julian,

I am very happy with the new text of appendix A;
thank you for addressing the issues so quickly.

My only remaining suggestion is to change the
wording of the following paragraph in A.3.2:

  "For the offering the receiver or sender
  indicates..."

The "receiver or sender" should probably be 
"initiator or target" because the party that
offers one of these keys can only be a sender
of these keys. Similar change would be good for
the "responding sender or receiver". I know that
sender and receiver could also be interpreted as
"sender of markers" and "reciever of markers",
but that's not quite how the paragraph sounds.

  Martins Krikis, Intel Corp.




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