RE: iSCSI: Small editorial update

["Julian Satran" <Julian_Satran@il.ibm.com>]

OK - I'll take out "starting with 0" - Julo

Eddy Quicksall <eddy_quicksall@ivivity.com> 06/25/2002 09:07 PM Please respond to Eddy Quicksall

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The implication comes from the phrase "For input (read) or bi-directional Data-In PDUs ... (starting with 0)".
 
Since "starting with 0" is already explained elsewhere, there should be no need to say it again here.
 
I suggest you remove "(starting with 0)" from both 9.7.5 and 9.8.1.
 
Here is the paragraph:
 
For input (read) or bi-directional Data-In PDUs, the DataSN is the
input PDU number (starting with 0) within the data transfer for the
command identified by the Initiator Task Tag.
 
Eddy
 
 
 
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Eddy, 

Where is the implication?  I am re-reading the text and I do not see it. 
If it is in the order of presentation then would the reverse order imply write data before read? 

Julo

Eddy Quicksall <eddy_quicksall@ivivity.com> 06/24/2002 07:37 PM Please respond to Eddy Quicksall

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Julo, 
  
At least, I don't think is is a good idea to leave an implication that is not correct. I'm referring to the fact that 9.7.5 clearly implies that a bidirectional command must have data-in before data-out. 
  
Eddy 
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Eddy - the text says already  "... the input PDU number" it repeats the sharing statement - I think it has enough to get things clear. 
I have changed bi-directional to bidirectional. 

Julo

Eddy Quicksall <eddy_quicksall@ivivity.com> 06/24/2002 04:35 PM Please respond to Eddy Quicksall

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The 1st paragraph needs a little change too. It implies that a
bi-directional command must have data-in before data-out. If you had
data-out first and R2Ts were being used, the DataSN would start with the
last R2TSN + 1.

And the 1st paragraph of 9.8.1 should probably say "starting with 0 for
unidirectional commands" instead of "starting with 0".

Also, SAM-2 uses the term "bidirectional" not "bi-directional". Can you
change that too?

Eddy

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OK - Julo


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Julian,
I think we need to add a clause that denotes that a bi-directional command
is being addressed in the second paragraph under 9.7.5 in your working
draft 14.  We should add the expression ", in the context of bidirectional
commands, ".  The following would be the revised paragraph.

"R2T and Data-In PDUs, in the context of bi-directional commands, share the
numbering sequence (see Section 2.2.2.3 Data Sequencing)."

I know it should be obvious when one really thinks about it, however,  it
make the intent easier to understand.

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