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RE: BKF Comments on iSCSI version 14
Looks
good, thanks. I agree with the direction the 'decimal discussion' is now
going.
Brian Forbes Brocade Communications
Brian,
Thanks - comments in
text Julo
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BKF Comments on iSCSI version 14
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I've sent a list of editorial comments directly to
Julian.
Technical comments:
T1:
Although it is
alluded to in section 11.10, the document must explicitly define the
effective value of Buffer Offset for immediate data.
Possible sections for doing so include 2.2.4 and
9.3.6.
+++ fixed in 2.2.4. This
was requested also by Eddy +++ T2:
I agree with the recent
reflector discussion that decimal is only used for numbers, hex for numbers
and binary, and base64 only for binary items. I believe the debate
should focus on the utility of the existing iSCSI type definitions and
avoid getting derailed by anecdotal references to data types in other
RFCs. +++ One of the reasons people want SCSI on IP is to leverage all
other IP infrastructure. Unfortunately the usage of decimal is beyond anectodal and we just
can't ignore it. We have however -
I think removed all the thorny related issues +++
T3:
Section 4.3.1, page 80:
"If the reconfiguration of iSCSI portal groups is a concern in a
given environment, the iSCSI initiator MUST use this key to ascertain that
it had indeed initiated the Login Phase with the intended target portal
group."
The use of MUST in the final sentence is untestable and should
probably be lower-case "should".
+++ we have several such instances. This usage can be certified in lab
test - although I agree that it untestable at run-time (has no check
condition). The same goes for many other MUST requirements +++
T4:
Section 11.8, page
215: "If the TargetAddress is returned as the result of a redirect
status in a login response, the comma and portal group tag
are omitted."
For interoperability reasons, I believe "are omitted"
should be "MUST be omitted". +++ fixed +++
T5:
Section 11.8, page 215:
"If the TargetAddress is returned within a SendTargets response, the
portal group tag is required."
For interoperability reasons, I believe
"is required" should be "MUST be included".
+++ fixed +++ Brian
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