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    iSCSI:Typo in draft 16?


    • To: "Ips Reflector (E-mail)" <ips@ece.cmu.edu>
    • Subject: iSCSI:Typo in draft 16?
    • From: "KRUEGER,MARJORIE (HP-Roseville,ex1)" <marjorie_krueger@hp.com>
    • Date: Wed, 11 Sep 2002 11:03:22 -0700
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    -----Original Message-----
    From: Julian Satran [mailto:Julian_Satran@il.ibm.com]
    Sent: Tuesday, September 10, 2002 11:38 PM
    To: KRUEGER,MARJORIE (HP-Roseville,ex1)
    Cc: Black_David@emc.com; Elizabeth.G.Rodriguez@123mail.net; John Hufferd
    Subject: RE: iSCSI:Typo in draft 16


    Thanks - Julo


    "KRUEGER,MARJORIE (HP-Roseville,ex1)" <marjorie_krueger@hp.com>

    11/09/02 01:23

           
            To:        Julian Satran/Haifa/IBM@IBMIL
            cc:        
            Subject:        RE: iSCSI:Typo in draft 16

           


    Oop, forgot to add:
    Is the pagination off?  The first page break seems to come too early, but maybe that's deliberate.
     
    The indentation got messed up between page 38 and page 39 - the 3rd, 4th 5th bullets have different indentation from the first two bullets.  

    Hi Julian

    Assuming that you make changes due to IETF last call, can you correct this item?  I think there's a typo in sec. 2.2.6.3.1  "Type "iqn." (iSCSI Qualified Name)"

     The 5th bullet items says

    "An optional colon (:), or prefixed string within the character set and
                          ^^^^^
    length boundaries that the owner of the domain name deems appropriate. "
     
    I think the ", or" is a typo?  If the string is present, it must be prefixed by a ":"  The current wording leave the impression that the ":" is optional.

    Regards,
    Marjorie Krueger
    Networked Storage Architecture
    Networked Storage Solutions
    Hewlett-Packard




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